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« Thread Started on Jul 27, 2008, 9:44pm » | |
Name: Roen Silvera
Gender: Male
DAE: Kotemon
Age: 15
Description: Roen has messy brown hair. His eyes are almond shaped and sapphire blue. His skin is lightly tanned. He is not too muscular. He usually wears silver framed glasses. On his hands he wears silver fingerless gloves. He also wears a black and white vest over a silver and black striped long sleeved shirt, with black pants that have silver spraypaint at the bottom. His shoes are the color black. He is also six feet tall and weighs 145 pounds.
History: When Roen was four years old his mother was diagnosed with cancer. She died a week after her diagnosis. Roen was really sad at this age for a long while until his fifth birthday. At that time Roen was distracted when he made new friends.
At the age 11 his new friends moved away. He usually spent his time on the computer until he was 15. That night he found a strange device in the pocket of his pants(digivice). At that time he fell into the digital world and met some digimon. These digimon explained him about the digital world and the digimon that inhabits it.
Digivice colours:
Strap colour-blue
Screen colour-silver
Button colours-red
Base colour- black
Digivolution Line:Metal Koromon-powder blow
Kapurimon- Howling Blow
Kotemon- Hot Head, Thunder Note
Dinohumon- Lizard Lance
Kyuukimon- Blade Twister
SlashAngemon- Heavens Ripper, Holy Espada
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« Reply #1 on Jul 28, 2008, 2:09am » | |
Hmm, I'm not sure if we can accept this. As far as I know the events of the show did not happen, so the whole thing with Diaboramon is questionable. You'll have to let Veemon take a look at that, though I think it would be best to take it out. I highly suggest taking a look at some other people's (active ones) history to get an idea.
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« Reply #2 on Jul 28, 2008, 5:16am » | |
Hm... to my knowledge, we are suppose to be acting as if our characters, and the human race as a whole, know nothing about digimon. So no events from the show would have happened (or at least have been known about), and your character wouldn't have seen or heard about anything digimon related.
The rest of your profile looks pretty good, but I believe you'll have to change your character's history into something more fitting. For best results, try and include the following.
- Brief view at his life up till now (which seems more or less good already)
- What event/events led to him being transported to the digital world.
- And a brief look at how things went when he first arrived (I usually find it easiest to treat this one as if I was just RPing my arrival)
Get those in there in some way, shape, or form, and you'll be approved for sure.
Ah, also, while this isn't a requirement by any means, if you find the time, a lot of people find it helpful to have a description of your various attacks. Again, it's not something you have to do right away, or even at all, just something helpful if you feel like it.
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« Reply #3 on Jul 28, 2008, 10:22pm » | |
I'll do that, I didn't realize that none of the events of the show had ever tooken taken place.
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« Reply #4 on Jul 31, 2008, 1:52am » | |
how's this.
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« Reply #5 on Jul 31, 2008, 2:19pm » | |
its better but id prefer if you got the digivice when enteirng the digital world, plus a little more background wouldnt hurt, aside from that i like it.
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